A previous user
commented:
In our solitude we are transformed. Silence is not always golden, sometimes its deadly. Keep writing!
Tony Anderson
commented:
Great write
Shanta
commented:
Life is unfathomable white Light of energy - experienced through consciousness (silence) that always speaks the truth of beauty and Love!
Where is the Love?
rebeka Philips
commented:
Very sad poem.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Sep 18, 2017 at 2:52pm
Learn to love life........too much sadness for me....
Annamarie Sampson
commented on Sep 18, 2017 at 11:29pm
If it's too sad for you, then don't read it. And don't tell me how to live my life. I'll hate what I hate and love what I love.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Sep 20, 2017 at 2:33pm
Your poem is there to be read, and Critiqued........if you can't stand the heat...STAY OUT OF THE KITCHEN!!......and I won't be reading DOOM, AND GLOOM...any more.....
Annamarie Sampson
commented on Sep 20, 2017 at 4:06pm
The "critique" isn't bothering me. Critique away. But in the process, don't tell me or readers "learn to love life" cause that's not critique. We all hear that enough from others, we do not need to hear it from you as well.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Sep 23, 2017 at 12:15pm
You are blessed with Life....you are a long time ...DEAD...