Storm

poem by: D'Vina Dietrich
Written on Apr 01, 2015 

Rain falls,
Hitting me hard.
Tears from my eyes.

Thunder roars,
Shaking me entirely.
Deep in my chest.

Lightning strikes,
Slashing my heart.
Ending my pain.

 

Tags: beat, metaphor, deep, pain, imagery, rhyme, beat, riddle,

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Maria Williams commented:
Imagery is great.
Frank Hornby . commented on Oct 24, 2017 at 6:18pm
Brilliant!...three beautiful haiku's......creating a wonderful poem....great work D'Vina...
Christopher Russon commented on Oct 24, 2017 at 8:55pm
Great write.
Dinesh Chauhan commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 7:25am
nicce one brilliant
Q. Ramirez commented on Feb 21, 2021 at 3:27am
This poem inspired me to write "Tempest" (check out my works if you would). I have been reading your poetry closely. I have works titled "Lost" and "Dark Corner". "Who am I" reminds me of me. "Nonet" was cool and "Numb" very sexual. I like this years series of poems you wrote, most. "A Sestina For My Twin Flame"; comment from husband was a nice touch, forever newlyweds I assume. Sir you married a poeta. Keep inspired.
D'Vina Dietrich commented on Feb 21, 2021 at 3:32am
Thanks Q, its good to hear from you again. I really appreciate what you have to say about my writing! I really enjoy reading your poetry (:
Justin McElveen commented on Sep 01, 2021 at 2:14am
Any poem that involves death always captures me. This is short and darkly sweet. You are a great writer. Keep it up!

 

 

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