Suicide Alley
poem by:
Alli Steward
Written
on Jun 01, 2013
Promises-broken Words-unspoken Cuts-hidden Scars-redden Hearts-racing Bodies-pacing Tears-running Parents-shunning People-screaming Lights-gleaming Victims-loosing Knuckles-bruising All down Suicide Alley.
Tags: sad, depressing, pain,
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Rene Hernandez commented:
Very passionate....and honest
Alli Steward
commented:
****meaning****
Promises-broken
(got that because of everyone breaking promises or lying to me)
Words-unspoken
(got that because any time i try to reach out for help i get left while they leave)
Cuts-hidden
(all over my legs. sometimes wrists.)
Scars-redden
(i cut deeper into my scars most of the time :/ )
Hearts-racing
(my heart always races when i am going crazy)
Bodies-pacing
(i cant help pacing back and forth)
Tears-running
(my tears become so elabrite that they fall heavily onto my cuts or hands)
Parents-shunning
(ive always had a feeling my parents had hated me..and it was true)
People-screaming
(thats all my mom and dad do..scream at me...then i go into my room and scream at myself.)
Lights-gleaming
(i wake up to bright rooms)
Victims-loosing
(people bullied or like me...we loose.)
Knuckles-bruising
(i hit walls till i brake a knuckle or they bleed..whichever comes first..)
All down Suicide Alley.
(all while im contemplating suicide)
Royce B
commented:
Very intense and passionate.
Frank Hornby .
commented:
....I'm sorry Allie....but you need medical help..........asap......your comment is a cry for help.....please ask for it...
