Q. Ramirez
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Great concept, I would visit my grandparents, uncles, aunts and nephews. Like it.
Charde' Ridgeway
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Thanks so much, i decided to write this poem for my grandmother who passed away from cancer. Thanks for commenting
Purple Couch
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This is a wonderful poem. This is the type of poetry we are looking for for our next publication. if you are interested in having this poem published please check out our future projects. http://www.purplecouchpublishing.com/#!future-projects/utwgq
Christopher Russon
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Nice poem.l wrote a poem for my father who sadly passed away 2 years ago
I liked your poem.
Shanta
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True - God created you and He created nothing else!
Shanta
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Ann Sdono
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Sad. Very nice
Fauxcroft wade
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Beautiful
Lakiesha Cole
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Nice poem! If heaven had a visiting day, I probably wouldn't want to come back here. God would tell me girl go back to the earth I have work for you to do!
Charde' Ridgeway
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Thanks everyone for the great feedback!!!!
Godfrey Georges
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i lost my daughter and my brother. it would be nice see them again.
Frank Hornby .
commented on May 19, 2018 at 5:56pm
I'd be outside those gates every morning at opening time.......just to give a few hugs out .......lovely thought Charde....
k river
commented on Jul 27, 2020 at 7:36am
Hi Charde',I sure would enjoy a Heaven's visiting day. I wouldn't want to come back no way that's why I wouldn't be able to just go for a visit. I will eventually get there all in GOD'S timing not mine. Now then as for your poem, I think it reads well, however, there are two slight grammatical errors.
1. "God" needs to be capitalized the second time it is used
2. last line the "I" needs to be capitalized.
Best regards,
K River