Alex McEwan
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Powerful stuff keep it up
Trevor Cartwright
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So what is the light? Is the light relative?
julie cook
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the light depends on how you want to see it "the light at the end of the tunnel" trever
alex thank you
Trevor Cartwright
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No problem. I like how these lyrics are open-ended. People have entirely different circumstances, but there really are a few constant questions and struggles we all share.
greg woods
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Well done Julie, I like the way you expressed your pain then killed it off with a positive ending, this shows strength rather than hopelessness and allows the reader to understand your battle then be happy for you.
Milton Robertson
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I am pleased you fought too, there is a reason hang in there and all that's in the dark will come to the light.
Christopher Russon
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I am pleased you found your way out of those darkened places.
Chris Cleverly
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Nice work, thanks for posting
Shanta
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" i am now at the light"? Needs Poetic explanation, otherwise it's a statement.
Sun Chaser
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Your place is familiar. I know that pain. Coming out of it is such a free feeling,sometimes memorably so. Enjoyed your poem,thanks for sharing.
Fauxcroft wade
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Passionate and powerful
Ovais Khalid
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simply made me say wow
julie cook
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Thank you all so much for the kind comments I hope this poem will also help people and show people there not alone
Frank Hornby .
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Julie.....reading that poem was so upsetting....my heart breaks for you, and I admire your courage to share your ordeal......That man wasn't a father, more a monster!.......I hope he was reported, and severely punished......I hope he is dead....your poem might give courage to other innocent children also suffering in silence..........who should stay silent ...NO MORE!.....