Rachel Cartwright
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yeah i was bored one night..
Alex McEwan
commented:
very well done good poem
greg woods
commented:
Good one
wanda Sheldrick
commented:
good poem
A previous user
commented:
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A previous user
commented:
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Cambria L.
commented:
it sounds like a song
Madelon Hucks
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Really free flowing and
relateable
A previous user
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hi
Elizabeth Ladji
commented:
cute, I like it!
Terry Upham
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Double scripts in life's wicked flips three verbs and throwing nothing but reverb.
Twice the lyrical lines, avast steer clear of this lyrical pioneer with mystical lines futuristic rhymes killing the physics of time.
My intellectual beauty its brilliance, resilience of this philosophical crazy mind with speeds in excess of a Maserati mind.
Only crazy is the vehicle of world's transformation it's finicky essence of brilliant master's of the mind's Live love with the sweat of fears life's wicked in so many way's.
To the crazy mind's of a crazed thinking way, crazy changed before crazy ever changed a crazy mind. Go for life of the amazing, choose what you want & be much more. Provocative model of a photograph a clay sculpture of a lady in kind. Artist of provocative art's mending an bending hour's to love. Transducer of fear to fevers love's virtues of unconditional greatest philosophy. To world's of philosophical philosophies in prophet's of profits of a personal fee in which life agrees.
Guns To jungles it's sweeter roses, to the unconventional wisdoms which has never been. To stand & live for better, than some kind of gun. Fast lifestyles of the rocking chairs, sit back and enjoy the speed of memories life's to live once an life has it's own pace. Composer's of compromises the sediments of our settlements are noteworthy symphonies in musical scales an impale to life's frail detail. 

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Terry Upham
commented:
Double scripts in life's wicked flips three verbs and throwing nothing but reverb.
Twice the lyrical lines, avast steer clear of this lyrical pioneer with mystical lines futuristic rhymes killing the physics of time.
My intellectual beauty its brilliance, resilience of this philosophical crazy mind with speeds in excess of a Maserati mind.
Only crazy is the vehicle of world's transformation it's finicky essence of brilliant master's of the mind's Live love with the sweat of fears life's wicked in so many way's.
To the crazy mind's of a crazed thinking way, crazy changed before crazy ever changed a crazy mind. Go for life of the amazing, choose what you want & be much more. Provocative model of a photograph a clay sculpture of a lady in kind. Artist of provocative art's mending an bending hour's to love. Transducer of fear to fevers love's virtues of unconditional greatest philosophy. To world's of philosophical philosophies in prophet's of profits of a personal fee in which life agrees.
Guns To jungles it's sweeter roses, to the unconventional wisdoms which has never been. To stand & live for better, than some kind of gun. Fast lifestyles of the rocking chairs, sit back and enjoy the speed of memories life's to live once an life has it's own pace. Composer's of compromises the sediments of our settlements are noteworthy symphonies in musical scales an impale to life's frail detail. 

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mr. chap
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LOL, I have this situation sometimes too
Elizabeth J White
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This is my favorite one so far love it cute
Elizabeth J White
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great
Marlene Parmenter
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My sort of poem.Easy flowing.
Wendy Phelan
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Love this, it is honest and I relate to it very much. Funny! Thank you
Stephanie Warwick
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Cool
M Losthere
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I am just getting started here. I rhyme with the best but I vary my style.
NeverMind GoodBye
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I like just tossing words out and see what happens, no planning or thought, winging it, even it's jumbled and goofy.... best way to write I think... I like your poem because I stay up late too, good time to be inspired (it's ok to be confused)
teresa Skyles
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Really nice.
Christopher Russon
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It normally takes me a long time to write a poem the one about my father seemed to Wright itself.
It came in no time.were did I get the inspiration makes me wonder.enough of me.loved your poem
Amia Jorge
commented:
Cute
john steele
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I think for not know what to write at that time of night you most definitely did alright lol that much I can say cause I read it very much right I love your poem its got so much rhyme just the way I believe poems should be everytime thank you for that share your the first I commented on this site its my first time :}
Cecilia Crasto
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I can relate to this!
Shanta
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Sooooooo much feedback on nothing - why?
Allan P Stevens
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Very nice, easy to read and follow.
Lorson. sr
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Rachel, I find when I'm bored is when I turn out my best stuff. I like your meandering this poem which gave me an inspiration to write something even if it makes no sense! Great stuff!!
A previous user
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Love this so creatively penned the humor sparks out at you.It has so many varieties on interest.
Geoffrey Brewer
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I don't get it. Am I missing something? What is good about this poem? Why so many positive comments?
A previous user
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I've tried that! you might have made more sense though. whimsical!!!
Mishley Nim
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Nice one
Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Well I haven't got a poem
I haven't got a thyme
So I guess I'll just shut up
And stop wasting all your time
John Carson
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Cute and lyrical. Made me smile.
rebeka Philips
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Good poem!
Edward shields
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What dribble.
Braverman waltz
commented on Sep 10, 2017 at 5:53pm
....and so it is said the woman to the night,for all is well as she sleeps under its light.
Anna Tate
commented on Sep 16, 2017 at 10:43am
Good poem
R.T. Aquinas
commented on Sep 27, 2017 at 8:46pm
I found your poem rather inspiring.
Allan P Stevens
commented on Nov 19, 2017 at 8:52pm
Very nice, well written.
Jazz Force
commented on Nov 28, 2017 at 3:08pm
Try finding new words, free associate, take yourself out of it.
Jazz Force
commented on Dec 01, 2017 at 8:14pm
Really?
James Farley
commented on Mar 25, 2018 at 1:02pm
Very cute poem :-)
Frank Hornby .
commented on Aug 04, 2018 at 7:24am
Yeah, I agree ...it's nothing....
Reeves
commented on Nov 05, 2018 at 7:02pm
Terry Upham is out of conttol.
Rachel Cartwright
commented on Dec 23, 2018 at 12:27am
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Geoffrey Heath Price
commented on Mar 13, 2020 at 7:56am
well done this will cheer one up if you are a little down. a good poem
Kenvil Atkins
commented on Aug 04, 2020 at 5:34pm
Bravo Excellent