Christopher Russon
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Very good poem.
I agree looks are deceptive.
Cecilia Crasto
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Excellent! Nice rhythm to this one, and very true. Fickle world today; nice humor on the final lines.
Cecilia Crasto
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Thank you Michael for those encouraging words.
Tony Anderson
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Great write, really Awesome
Geoffrey Brewer
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Pleasing rhythm, rhyme, clarity, simplicity and wit. It's nice to read a poem that I can understand.
Cecilia Crasto
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I appreciate your constructive words, and I agree, some poems are too deep and the reader is left wondering what it's all about.
Piya Paul Mudgal
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Phenomenal Expression. Crisp, Clear and Concise.
Arch Angel
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The beginning...
Arch Angel
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The beginning...
Maria Williams
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I love the way you've mixed humor into real life situations . Well done.
Cecilia Crasto
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Thank you Maria for supporting my work.
ann parks
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Lovely poem Cecilia . Arranged marriages are some of the happiest due to realistic expectations.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 05, 2017 at 7:27pm
Nice poem Cecilia....I'm so glad,(and so lucky)...to have found my future wife when I was 17....and she was 15......51yrs ago.....
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 05, 2017 at 7:27pm
Nice poem Cecilia....I'm so glad,(and so lucky)...to have found my future wife when I was 17....and she was 15......51yrs ago.....
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 05, 2017 at 7:27pm
Nice poem Cecilia....I'm so glad,(and so lucky)...to have found my future wife when I was 17....and she was 15......51yrs ago.....
Cecilia Crasto
commented on Nov 05, 2017 at 10:34pm
You really crack me up Frank, actually we share a lot in common, I met my future husband when I was 14 and he was 17 and we married 9 years later, he passed away in 2009. My son also named Frank has a great sense of humor like you, life and soul of the party, and I suspect you are too~cheers to Frank the comedian!!