The Perfect Friend ©

poem by: Shannen Wrass
Written on Sep 29, 2013

Today I found a friend
Who knew everything I felt
She knew my every weakness
And the problems I’ve been dealt
She understood my wonders
And listened to my dreams
She listened to how I felt about life and love
And knew what it all means
Not once did she interrupt me
Or tell me I was wrong
She understood what I was going through
And promised she'd stay long
I reached out to this friend
To show her that I care
To pull her close and let her know
How much I need her there
I went to hold her hand
To pull her a bit nearer
And I realized this perfect friend I found
Was nothing but a mirror


Written by Shannen Wrass
Copyright © 1995 Shannen Wrass. All Rights Reserved

 

Tags: rhyme, inspirational,

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Christopher Russon commented:
Wow.words with an unexpected twist.well written poem.
Royce B commented:
Something everyone should understand. Thank you for sharing
Rod Moffat commented:
Shannen, your short well crafted poignant word journey brought me into your description of a "perfect friend"... Then what a great positive ending with a simple but provocative twist. Really like your style.
Dinesh Chauhan commented on Feb 02, 2018 at 7:38am
nice poem i really enjoyed reading it
A previous user commented on Feb 21, 2018 at 9:54pm
Oh wow... This really is good :)

 

 

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