The Greener Grass

poem by: Scribe Granted
Written on Jan 13, 2017

Abundant with green pigmentation, not too low, not too lofty, standing lusciously
Merely pecked by suns rays, making strong and sharp blades,
to bounce back when by foot they are grazed.
Lightly lilting in wind, my own, inferior condemned, I commend, blades move with grace
Not pushed down by hard night rain, absorb water with strain, glistening with dew in the morning haughtily.

I receive compliments about my own, a good introduction to home
but cannot help observing short comings when lone.
My neighbor waves "hi", I notice him holding similar eye, perhaps I am mistaken...
Would my outlook ring true, in his point of view? In rankings I may have first place taken.

 

 

Tags: happy, inspirational, metaphor, encouraging, imagery,

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Edward shields commented:
Grass is good?
Scribe Granted commented:
It is sort of a play on the phrase "the grass is always greener on the other side" if that helps you when readiing
Scribe Granted commented:
There is an aspect of noticing beauty in nature but the grass itself isn't very important as much as symbolic.
Cecilia Crasto commented:
I think your poems are wonderful, inspirational and beautifully expressed, thank you for sharing them and look forward to reading more of your work.
A previous user commented:
thank you Cecilia :)

 

 

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