A Gentle Hand
poem by:
D'Vina Dietrich
Written
on Oct 01, 2017
A gentle hand Once wiped my tears... It was so soft, Loving and comforting. I long for that touch.. My tears now run. Splattering on this page, No hand to stop them... My comfort is gone I need you Mom. A gentle hand Will never return. My heart aches for That loving touch. A Mothers hand Cannot be replaced. I just want it back.. But truth is.... It's buried in the dirt. Alone, I deal with hurt. A gentle hand That's all I want. Only you understood And cared.. It's tough without you Everything is different. Mom I miss you.. I hate this so much! Mom why'd you go... And leave me.. Alone.
Tags: Pain, Dark, Rhyme, Depressing, Love, Sad, Deep,
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Frank Hornby . commented on Oct 01, 2017 at 1:52pm
I still miss my mum......after 40yrs......but it's nice to remember her.....nice poem D'Vina.."
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 01, 2017 at 7:45pm
Thanks frank. Its only been a year for me and here birthday is in a few days.. Just been missing her.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 02, 2017 at 9:58am
You will always miss your mum D'Vina......just keep remembering those happy times, and keep writing poems about her......it will make you cry, but it will help you....honest.....Frank...
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 02, 2017 at 6:59pm
Thanks and I hope it does help. I'm hoping getting back into writing will help me.
Christopher Russon
commented on Oct 03, 2017 at 3:22pm
Sorry about your mum I still miss my parents and sister .writing to some extent does
Help.You write well so please keep writing D.vina .
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 05, 2017 at 5:40pm
Life really throws curve balls at you don't it? :/ &' thank you I am trying to get back into it.
Milton Robertson
commented on Oct 06, 2017 at 1:52am
So sad I know how you feel but there is light at the end of the tunnel.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 7:22am
lovely
David MaxOptimism
commented on Mar 27, 2020 at 10:22am
Nice flow, dripping with emotions, enjoyable read... loved it!
