Careful Now
poem by:
Nemo Nemees
Written
on Nov 09, 2017
Careful now be careful of where your stepping the ice is thin my dear don't ask about daddy don't ask of why he gave you ibuprofen instead of you ADHD meds don't ask of why there is so many beer cans in the recycling bin don't ask of why he sleeps all day don't ask why he doesn't remember don't ask just don't ask okay please be careful of where your stepping The ice is thin my dear
Tags: Sad, Metaphor, Depressing, Confused, Dark, Imagery, Abstract, Fear, Deep,
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Cecilia Crasto commented on Nov 09, 2017 at 10:32pm
Heart wrenching and very well expressed, life is certainly very sad for some children.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 10, 2017 at 12:48pm
Sad poem.....
Taha Hassan
commented on Nov 10, 2017 at 6:32pm
Don't ask ... Don't look ... Don't say ..... Don't feel ..... Just ... Don't Exist. Because they feel we're a mistake .... and we are hopelessly owned by them ... helpless ...... But .... not for long... maybe? -T
A previous user
commented on May 08, 2019 at 11:23am
I'm totally the type of person that would smash that ice and jab it in their eye. But I understand where you're coming from. It's hard to get out of a situation when it's all you know. But good things come from the same place strength does and if something like this hasn't killed you yet then I can guarantee you're gonna be one tough cookie :)
