Give me thoughts
poem by:
Gabriela Fuentes
Written
on Dec 04, 2017
Show me scars Don´t brag about cars I can see many have them But you still hidding Show me feelings I´ll like to start listening to theories Give me thoughts I like hugs but is it all? Can you kiss my mind? Or my lips is all you want? Eyes love you Soul wonders where this will go And brain... already said no
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Q. Ramirez commented on Dec 05, 2017 at 7:47pm
Very deep poem. How strange that I have one about kissing the mind. Wrote it several years ago but I never thought it was complete. Perhaps I will post it the way it is. Thanks for sharing a good work of art.
Gabriela Fuentes
commented on Dec 05, 2017 at 11:19pm
You should totally post it! thanks for your kind words
Jazz Force
commented on Dec 06, 2017 at 2:38pm
can you kiss my mind-great line!
Q. Ramirez
commented on Dec 06, 2017 at 9:45pm
I am not good at promoting my poems (if you can call them poems), but just posted My Kiss for you to see.
Christopher Russon
commented on Mar 18, 2018 at 1:42pm
Excelent poem.I think we all could do with a hug at times.
It works wonders.
