the man living 2 lives

story by: MIkey Partin
Written on May 19, 2013

Once upon a time, there was a man which lived 2 lives.
His 1st life was the life where he had 3 children, a wife, and a brother.
The 2nd life was the life where he was homeless and had barely any money.
He couldn't decide if one is real or fake.
The way he lives 2 lives is: the lives each go into the pattern. Every time he goes to sleep, he finds himself in the other life.
one day, he finally found out which was the real life. Neither  of the lives where real or fake, he found out he was in a coma at the hospital after a friend died. after that day, He still sees something unusual, which is that he still sees that other person he saw when he was in the 2nd life, he also sees 3 children at the other side of the road of where he lives.
He still goes into the 2nd and 1st life...Doing unheard things...

 

Tags: confused, imagery, weird,

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William Brochinsky commented:
Curious this might need some explanation for me. Not sure what is real and what it not. Reads like a dream, scattered thoughts pushed together in a fashion where it does not need to be a linear thought. Interesting. thanks Bill
Frank Hornby . commented on Oct 15, 2017 at 5:13pm
Fascinating little story MIkey.......the unconscious mind is a mystery.......

 

 

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